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 24. Add a static slide/appendix shell only after presentation mode is clear.
    Astro remains an option, not the default next surface.
 Presentation visual audit, July 10:
 - Baseline-good: Scenes 3, 4, and 5 are good enough for now. Do not churn them
  unless a later rehearsal exposes a concrete problem.
 - Needs primary visual treatment: Scenes 1 and 2 still carry too much thesis
  framing as text. They need a clear opening artifact: product title boundary,
  problem shape, and "tool loop vs durable workflow" contrast.
 - Needs cleanup, not reinvention: Scene 6 has the right interactive figure
  foundation but still needs figure-specific polish where focus paths crowd or
  hide labels.
 - Needs visual strengthening: Scene 7 explains authoring but should show more
  product evidence and less generic process language.
 - Needs product-flow cohesion: Scenes 8-12 now have the right factual spine,
  but the demo surfaces still need stronger hierarchy between chat, operation,
  lifecycle, graph, interrupt, output, and evidence.
 - Needs non-text evaluation visuals: Scene 13 should become a compact evidence
  board or chart-like summary instead of prose-heavy results.
 - Needs closing visual: Scene 14 should land the boundary/future-work message
  with one memorable diagram, not just limits text.
 Recommended next visual slices:
 1. Opening visuals: rebuild Scenes 1 and 2 around concrete diagrams for
   "AI-agent pursuit -> workflow substrate" and "direct actions are not reusable
   automation".
 2. Demo surface cleanup: normalize Scenes 8-12 into a single product-flow
   language with factual panes, graph context, and fewer competing panels.
 3. Evidence and closing visuals: make Scenes 13 and 14 readable as a defense
   artifact: evaluation board, claim boundaries, and future-work map.
 Presentation wishlist / defense readiness:
 - Completed: visual pass for Scenes 6, 7, and 10 fixed architecture figure