docs: record presentation visual audit
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24. Add a static slide/appendix shell only after presentation mode is clear.
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Astro remains an option, not the default next surface.
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Presentation visual audit, July 10:
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- Baseline-good: Scenes 3, 4, and 5 are good enough for now. Do not churn them
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unless a later rehearsal exposes a concrete problem.
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- Needs primary visual treatment: Scenes 1 and 2 still carry too much thesis
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framing as text. They need a clear opening artifact: product title boundary,
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problem shape, and "tool loop vs durable workflow" contrast.
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- Needs cleanup, not reinvention: Scene 6 has the right interactive figure
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foundation but still needs figure-specific polish where focus paths crowd or
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hide labels.
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- Needs visual strengthening: Scene 7 explains authoring but should show more
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product evidence and less generic process language.
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- Needs product-flow cohesion: Scenes 8-12 now have the right factual spine,
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but the demo surfaces still need stronger hierarchy between chat, operation,
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lifecycle, graph, interrupt, output, and evidence.
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- Needs non-text evaluation visuals: Scene 13 should become a compact evidence
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board or chart-like summary instead of prose-heavy results.
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- Needs closing visual: Scene 14 should land the boundary/future-work message
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with one memorable diagram, not just limits text.
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Recommended next visual slices:
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1. Opening visuals: rebuild Scenes 1 and 2 around concrete diagrams for
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"AI-agent pursuit -> workflow substrate" and "direct actions are not reusable
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automation".
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2. Demo surface cleanup: normalize Scenes 8-12 into a single product-flow
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language with factual panes, graph context, and fewer competing panels.
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3. Evidence and closing visuals: make Scenes 13 and 14 readable as a defense
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artifact: evaluation board, claim boundaries, and future-work map.
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Presentation wishlist / defense readiness:
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- Completed: visual pass for Scenes 6, 7, and 10 fixed architecture figure
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