docs: complete defense speech simplification

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Presentation wishlist / defense readiness:
### Next: Simpler Speech
### Completed: Simpler Speech
1. Planned: give every beat one audience goal and one to three anchor terms,
then simplify the timed presenter path through Scenes 1-8 to one suggested
1. Completed: gave every beat one audience goal and one to three anchor terms,
then simplified the timed presenter path through Scenes 1-8 to one suggested
sentence per beat. Keep essential vocabulary such as Workflow API and
lifecycle record names, while moving detailed qualification into optional
notes or Q&A.
notes or Q&A. The current catalog contains a 9:27 must-say path with a
500-700 word budget and a 10:42 complete-deck target. Implementation:
[`defense speech simplification`](historical/superpowers/plans/2026-07-13-defense-speech-simplification.md).
### Completed: Factual Scene 8 Evidence
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exact URLs, keyboard controls, live RPC/demo fallback steps, story spine,
timing, and short speaker notes for what to say if the live demo fails.
[`defense speech and claim audit`](runbooks/defense-speech-and-claim-audit.md)
provides the current 11-minute speech plus navigation buffer, evidence qualifications, and
provides the current 9:27 speech plus navigation buffer, evidence qualifications, and
prioritized 12-minute Q&A.
Completed: [`defense story reweighting`](historical/superpowers/plans/2026-07-13-defense-story-reweighting.md)
now provides a typed 39-beat presenter-note catalog, a 650-850-word must-say
path, evidence warnings, and a 12:15 complete-deck timing contract. Completed:
now provides a typed 39-beat presenter-note catalog, a 500-700-word must-say
path, evidence warnings, and a 10:42 complete-deck timing contract. Completed:
[`interactive graphs and Scenes 3-6 choreography`](historical/superpowers/plans/2026-07-13-scenes-3-6-kernel-choreography.md)
adds restrained Scene 3-5 choreography, a semantic-zoom architecture map,
the readable `wf_core` and NodeUse figures, and a factual prepared-run graph